Sunday, October 31, 2010

Mencken and Modernism- Rachel Abboudi

Hyperbole

Hy-per-bo-le; noun

Definition:

Extravagant exaggeration (as “mile-high ice-cream cones”)

(www.merriam-webster.com)

During our exploration of Mencken in class, many, if not all, of us found his sweeping elitist generalizations pretty offensive. Often, I was completely appalled, rereading passages like “the difference between these negligent whites and the disfranchised Negroes is only superficial” (81). I’d cringe, thinking to myself, “did he really just write that?” No one would contest that the shock factor in this piece is painfully apparent.

From a pedagogical perspective, I would argue that, whatever Mencken’s goal is with this particular piece, he’s achieving it through those tones, arguments, and brash statements that we all find so offensive. No need to get insulted, Mencken is simply trying to get his point across to his audience by meeting them at their level. Through the material we have read in this course, it is more than obvious that society had “dumbed-down” in the twenties. Knowledge itself was being bottled and sold to the general masses to be guzzled up quickly and spit back at dinner parties. Wisdom, opinions, and interests lost genuineness, while beauty in literature and art failed to inspire an uninterested nation. This is a brief picture of the society, Mencken, a thinking, feeling, and opinionated individual, was writing for. To view yourself as the only intellectually aware person in your community; now, that sounds scary. Mencken is faced with the following question: How do you make a crazed, apathetic nation stop and really listen? Easy: You give them a sucker punch. You MAKE them feel.

A most engaging tool, the use of exaggeration hooks a reader. When an argument is exaggeratedly blunt, or even offensive, such language appeals to human emotion. Whether it is passion for the cause or, simply, anger or guilt, the reader is offended and, consequently, drawn in. Our class has been the perfect example of this phenomenon. Students, who did not really care what Mencken had to say, suddenly become annoyed with his tone and insulted by his offensive generalizations. Whether you agree with his argument or not, Mencken has definitely succeeded in making you care.

Though his attack on national brainlessness may plunge you as the reader into a fit of defensiveness, Mencken is simply begging you and society to question. Ascribing a mob mentality to the general masses, a mentality that is both illogical and fueled by fear, Mencken is expressing frustration in the community’s negligence in investigating opinions and ideas. The underlying argument in Mencken’s rant is that society, especially a “democratic” society shouldering the responsibilities of representation and personal freedoms, needs to be one able to filter the jerks from holding public office and the foolish political ideas from taking effect. With his “illogical man” theory, Mencken has painted a scary caricature of a brainless nation being guided, as a puppy, with treats and a stick. Mencken attacks the intelligence of the common man to stir in him the ambition to oexclusively accept those ideas that are “borne out of immense accumulations of empiric corroboration” (34). A culture built on the foundation of the individual’s right to elect to office whomever he so pleases presents a massive responsibility on the individual to keep educated and informed. As a reader separated from the petty insults and open to Mencken’s overall argument, one can see that Mencken is outlining potential danger in national naïveté and apathy, and begs through his writing for social and political awareness in order to prevent political manipulation.

Now I think it’s easier to understand why Mencken’s rant does not offer the effected reader a viable solution to the problem of democracy, a significant point of frustration for the class. It does not offer solution because, by definition, it cannot. Framed in extended hyperbole, Mencken’s rant is a cry for human awareness and heightened sensitivity disguised as a political piece calling for political reformation. Mencken does not argue the benefits of one form of government over the other. On the contrary, he seems to give every governmental structure a run for its money. He argues that democracy is a system of manipulating the country through creating fearful realities for the masses, “The whole history of the country has been a history of melodramatic pursuits of horrendous monsters, most of them imaginary” (40). However, simultaneously, Mencken takes on the disadvantages of the alternative head-on. No monarch, Mencken argues, is as free as he may seem to make his own political decisions, “he had still to bear it in mind that his people, oppressed too much, could always rise against him” (76). In his analysis of different governmental structures on the political spectrum, isn’t it obvious that he is underscoring the potential power an aware and cognizant nation has? Mencken simply craves national political awareness and for the nation to recognize and harness its potential political influence. He is not trying to write the government into reformation and, therefore, offers no governmental solution.

As a reader of Mencken, you can’t let yourself get stuck on the offensive hyperbole or you’ll miss the whole point of his rant. Go ahead; associate yourself with the thinking minority! As a thinking scholar, separate yourself from the material and think about what he’s saying in its context. Does an intelligent, educated, and painfully socially aware Mencken really hate every minority or underprivileged person? Or is his generalization so offensive and so radical that it accomplishes exactly what it has set out to do: make the reader stop, get angry, and think?

11 comments:

  1. I hear what you're saying; Mencken certainly shakes people up with his writing. I have a question, though: how far does Mencken's hyperbole extend before he loses credibility? Take the example of his idea about blacks voting in the South...why would Mencken make such an outrageous claim, one that would surely open him up to widespread criticism? Does Mencken's desire to "wake up" the public work, if he stands to lose his credibility? Wouldn't that backfire?

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  2. I think you make a very good point, and as thinking people, we need to learn to separate our emotional responses to the (often times offensive) particulars of Mencken's argument and extract his main ideas. The basic concepts of being an individualist, the importance of questioning that which you don't understand or agree with, and the importance of fighting for what you believe is right and true, regardless of public opinion are essential for any thinking person. Whether or not the specifics of his argument are correct, the message is clear: Don't underestimate the power of the individual. Remember to stay true to yourself and check your actions every once in a while- Am I doing this because "I" believe in it or because I have been conditioned by society to act this way?

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  3. To respond to Helen's comment:

    We discussed in class that Mencken desired to become famous through his use of extremes. Even if most supporters of democracy get a bad taste in their mouth when Mencken is mentioned, he did accomplish what he sought after. He became famous in his time (and infamous now).

    As Rachel mentioned in her post, no matter how distasteful we may find his analogies - comparing the inconvenience of jury duty with a suicide mission - he woke us up. So while we might not respect him personally and even if there was widespread criticism of his claims and his credibility was put into question, it was still attention. And if we follow Rachel's interpretation of Mencken, that really was all he wanted.

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  4. Rachel you bring up a good point. I never thought of the tone used in his book was a way to reel people in. Honestly, the tone of the book made me turn the other way. In my opinion, the best way to have people read your book is through a story. For example, Anita Loos had something to say about the way society was back then and she did so cleverly in her book Gentlemen Prefer Blondes. With the cute story there a satirical twist that made people see how silly they were acting. It was painful to read Mencken because all he was doing was complaining. And i do not know about you but i hate it when people complain. But especially to write a book with the intention of having the unfortunate reader to read through the entire book without even having a solution? It is easy to criticize, but it takes a true intellectual and leader to offer a solution. And in that aspect, Mencken failed.

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  5. I understand Rachel's interpretation of Mencken and agree with her as to what he was trying to do. Like Kim said, he also achieved part of his goal. However he didn't only 'turn Elizabeth off', he did the same to me as well. He was trying to prove to his readers that he was one of the elite that were mentioned so frequently in his notes against democracy. Mencken did this by his use of high vocabulary and hyperbole so that the average person would not be able to understand right away. I believe that he wanted people to 'break their teeth' reading this book in order to infer that he is amongst the small minority that deserves to be 'put on a pedestal'. This book did not cause me to think very highly of Mencken. He sounds extremely intelligent, however he is just arrogant.

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  6. Yael, that is an interesting point you make regarding Mencken's high level of language and argument style. I would argue that the same way his rhetoric and obnoxious tone forces the reader to get upset (which you have attested to in claiming to be "turned off"), perhaps his varied vocabulary, in a sense, forces the reader to investigate, struggle, and become educated. In that sense, Mencken is actually accomplishing his goal completely.

    In regard to what Elizabeth mentioned about Mencken's seeming failure to offer a solution, I stand by what I wrote in my post. The book is not about a political solution. In fact, one might even go as far as to say it's not even about a political problem. This piece is clearly meant to shock the reader into intellectual awareness using political rhetoric as a facade. Therefore, there is no need to introduce a a political solution.

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  7. Ok...I know that coming from me this is going to sound weird, but when I was going over On Democracy for the midterm some of what Mencken said struck me as genius. I absolutely understand his use of sarcasm and what Yael calls "high language" and argumentative style. The only example I can think of is high school debate club. You stand on your side of the stage and listen quietly as your opponent blabs on about the stupid side of the argument. Once they're done you take what they said and rip it to shreds, sometimes using their own language (stressing it in one way or another) to show how foolish and useless their argument is. The first time I read On Democracy, Mencken's argument appeared to be filled with holes and lack of substance, but on my second reading there was much more there than appeared to me in the first round. I have to agree with Racheli on this one. Mencken's use of "high language and argument style" forces the reader to get upset. Eventually they'll begin to think and form their own opinion which I agree was his point in the first place.

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  8. I agree with Yael and Elizabeth. He turned me off as well. I found his book very hard to understand. The fact that all Mencken seemed to do was complain, made me not want to read anymore. If he had offered a solution then it would have been a little bit better for me. I also did not like how he put down people who were not elite. Just because people are not part of the elite class does not mean that they are stupid. I agree with Yael on that he is writing this book so that the average person does not understand it right away. It certainly worked on me because it took me a long time before I was able to understand what Mencken was trying to say.

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  9. A few thoughts: first, with respect to Mencken's difficulty, it's worth noting that some of it is because of his distance in time from us, combined with his reliance on (then) contemporary examples. Even if he had "dumbed it down," much of what he had to say would remain "difficult" to us, because we have to stop and Google his references, which many students are unwilling to do, no matter how much I plead with you to look up things you don't understand.

    So some of his difficulty is related to his dated references. Some of it is, however, a result of his intentionally high brow allusions--and Americans hate the high brow in general, except for in rare moments in history (like the 20s) when highbrow culture achieved some mainstream appeal. In general, most Americans prefer Mickey Mouse to Shakespeare, Elvis to Bach, and Doctor Phil to Plato. This, Mencken believes, is the problem with this country and with democracy. So it is only in keeping with his general argument that he makes highbrow rather than pop-cultural references.

    Rachel makes a great point when she writes "A culture built on the foundation of the individual’s right to elect to office whomever he so pleases presents a massive responsibility on the individual to keep educated and informed." This problem is compounded when so called "news" sources consistently misinform viewers and substitute opinion and entertainment for journalism. And it's only gotten worse since Mencken's day. It's harder than ever for Americans to rise to the occasion of their democratic imperative.

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  10. I, like Tami, gained a new appreciation for Mencken when I studied for the midterm. Once I was able to grasp his ideas I realized how relevant and true they really are. Nowadays as well the American public is guilty of not making educated choices in the political realm. Instead of electing the qualified individual often they are blinded by superficial characteristics such as good looks and well delivered speeches. As Racheli says this same phenomenon frustrated Mencken and I agree he wanted the people to realize the error of their ways. Futhermore, I think Racheli is correct that his vocabulary serves to engage the reader as it makes one conduct a close reading in order to understand the book. An author wants his reader to read closely so that he/she receives the message of the book.

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  11. Reading this post again at the end of the semester while studying for the final certainly helps shine a new light on everything we learnt this semester! Everything about the twenties was escaping the harsh realities of American life. Everyone wanted unabashed fun and they were willing to give up their high class to achieve it. Obviously someone as intellectual as Mencken would find this attitude appalling and would realize that the only way to be heard by the nation would be to speak/write in generalizations and extremely harsh.

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